tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4693566710558019887.post8004466738255398014..comments2023-12-25T11:54:00.010+00:00Comments on Writes of Passage: Haiku Wednesday 2 FebDominic de Mattoshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05171145945316152596noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4693566710558019887.post-75621695871710664522011-02-04T07:52:58.090+00:002011-02-04T07:52:58.090+00:00I do not know if my earlier comment has gone throu...I do not know if my earlier comment has gone through.<br />Just to say that I liked both the Haiku's and the first out shined the second. Good Lord that one was excellent!! :)Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4693566710558019887.post-12073964631827896872011-02-03T21:41:11.482+00:002011-02-03T21:41:11.482+00:00Both of these are excellent!Both of these are excellent!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4693566710558019887.post-37560700965910474312011-02-03T09:59:08.191+00:002011-02-03T09:59:08.191+00:00I loved these. I would never have guessed you foun...I loved these. I would never have guessed you found the theme tough. They are brilliant. I wish I'd thought of those themes on the theme. :O)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4693566710558019887.post-15808062582602551292011-02-03T02:52:43.856+00:002011-02-03T02:52:43.856+00:00You did well, even if the theme wasn't an easy...You did well, even if the theme wasn't an easy one. I like to make us all think a little - whats the fun if they're too obvious or easy, right? Great takes on theme, well done!Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog?http://youknowthatblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4693566710558019887.post-27275668368400546892011-02-03T01:59:03.034+00:002011-02-03T01:59:03.034+00:00two very different, yet very much the same poems!two very different, yet very much the same poems!Riahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14269825324849426616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4693566710558019887.post-58107067847762310092011-02-03T00:26:44.273+00:002011-02-03T00:26:44.273+00:00OOOOhhhhhhh love the confession Haiku wonderful!OOOOhhhhhhh love the confession Haiku wonderful!Amanda Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11631827449933791507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4693566710558019887.post-13856522862593141892011-02-02T22:45:15.143+00:002011-02-02T22:45:15.143+00:00Awwww such sad and sorrowful haikus!!! Lovely to r...Awwww such sad and sorrowful haikus!!! Lovely to read - thank you! Take care<br />xOld Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4693566710558019887.post-40137860561891007892011-02-02T20:57:07.016+00:002011-02-02T20:57:07.016+00:00With my history in the newspaper business, I have ...With my history in the newspaper business, I have to like the second one best, but the first is quite poignant, Dom. Not, however, as poignant as "shackled to a shameful past"! At least the first haiku includes forgiveness following the disclosure, whereas the second implies none in the person's lifetime.<br />By the way, I played around with a story using different fonts. I used more than 50 font names, but couldn't come up with much of a plot.<br />-- K<br /><br />Kay, Alberta, Canada<br />An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous TravelKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4693566710558019887.post-82864222226202204882011-02-02T20:27:07.489+00:002011-02-02T20:27:07.489+00:00I don't know how you do it! Both of them are s...I don't know how you do it! Both of them are so good and really capture what they are trying to express. That being said. I think the one about confession is my fave!Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12096764010151024050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4693566710558019887.post-74152809099492686152011-02-02T20:08:05.123+00:002011-02-02T20:08:05.123+00:00Nicely done. I like them both. The fellow in the s...Nicely done. I like them both. The fellow in the second needs to pay a visit to the fellow in the first. :)Lisa Ricard Clarohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05048410207952052295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4693566710558019887.post-73942926810756330992011-02-02T19:57:07.343+00:002011-02-02T19:57:07.343+00:00I really like the way the first one is worded!I really like the way the first one is worded!Summer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4693566710558019887.post-18211241742062151682011-02-02T19:46:58.650+00:002011-02-02T19:46:58.650+00:00Nice Dom.
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N. R. Williams, fantasy authorNice Dom.<br />Nancy<br /><a href="http://nrwilliams.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">N. R. Williams, fantasy author</a>N. R. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02174506528962095858noreply@blogger.com