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Monday 29 November 2010

Consider the Moon




If you are looking for my poem, I have taken it down for a few months while I submit it as a competition entry. If you would like to read it, e-mail me at dominicdem(at)gmail(dot)com

Dominic de Mattos
Nov 2010

16 comments:

  1. Very nicely said. I like it.
    -- K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  2. Hi Dominic, greetings from the rainforest! Found my way here from Madeleine's. I'm enjoying your blog already, so I thought I'll follow you

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  3. This is a beautiful poem that touched my heart! Well done.

    I have recently joined a creative writing site called 'Helium', it's a good site for creative writers!

    Thank you. Love love, Andrew. HIGH.

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  4. Beautifully written, Dominic. Thank you for sharing. I truly loved it! :D

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  5. Welcome to my blog Grandpa, hope you enjoy it here! I love blog hopping and finding new people!

    Thank you Kay, Andrew and Brenda :D

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  6. What an ethereal poem, lovely!! I'm so a moon child (Cancerian horoscope wise not that it means anything!!)!! She truly is a spectacular star!

    Take care
    x

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  7. Hi Dom this is a beautiful piccie did your daughter take it? The poem is also beautiful too it touched my heart.

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  8. Hi Joanna, thank you. The picture is stolen (will do penance ... later) from somewhere (courtesy of Google Images)

    Thanks Kitty ...

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  9. This poem made me suck my breath in. It touched me deeply. How right you are about the moon and us!

    Jai

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  10. Beautiful poem, Dominic. Thank you!

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  11. Thanks Jai and Talli ... I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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  12. This is a beautiful poem! I loved reading it.

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  13. Beautifully written Dominic. The moon is to the sun as the church is to God. A reflection of His Light.
    Nancy
    N. R. Williams, fantasy author

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  14. Yes Nancy, and the more we turn to Him the more we reflect His light!

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  15. Truly lovely, Dom. Beautifully written.

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  16. It's a lovely poem, I like the imagery a lot :)
    Beautiful
    (There see I do post x3)

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