My offerings are not your usual Christmas fair ...
Which one resonates most with you?
 | Christmas feast groaning Presents heaped beneath the tree Where is Bethlehem? |
 | Homeless and hungry Cold seeps through rags, stench and grime Open heart and home |
 | Excitement mounting Soul deep joy transforming all find the inner child |
Oh, all three of the are wonderful! Insightful and deep. Wow.
ReplyDeleteI love finding the inner child :)
Very well done!
Moving on many levels. In other news:
ReplyDeleteMy apologies to you Dom. I have been working 12 hours a day on my edits and re-reading to get my ms done. I didn't look up the word (t..t). To my American ears it sounds like "all that." Now that I know better I posted an apology. I'm not removing it because I'd have to delete the whole thing, including comments. I may still do that after today.
Nancy
N. R. Williams, fantasy author
Oh I love them all - they are thoughtful and powerful but I like the third one - it spoke to my very own inner child!! Thank you!! Take care
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I'm a sucker - the third one!
ReplyDeleteThey are all very poignant. The second one really grabbed me. Well done Dominic :)
ReplyDeleteThe second one was my favourite. Lovely message there.
ReplyDeleteJai
These are EXCELLENT, Dom
ReplyDeleteSo how do you get snow across you blog page? :O)
I'm a social worker; number 2 of course.
ReplyDeleteBut they are all so rich and poignant.
I can think deep enough to write Haiku, but I enjoy it all the same.
........dhole
Lovely haikus! Often I feel in the glamour and bustle of Christmas, somehow the inner child is lost!
ReplyDeleteI love how you've touched on more than just Christmas and presents. I adored the third one, but the other two will make me stop and think about what Christmas actually means.
ReplyDeleteinner child is all
ReplyDeletegrin and smile to be for me
santa found great joy
:)
jeremy
With two 3 year olds running around here it has to be the last.
ReplyDeleteYour in my prayers.
Nancy
N. R. Williams, fantasy author