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Stony River and requires an entry of no more than 140 characters.
Sally had been excited about her new role in "Scrubs"
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CRIME SCHOOL: "First fleece your marks then launder the takings."
Bo-Peep hadn't quite got the hang of it yet.
Have a happy Monday!
These are both funny! I love this Scrubs episode, and I like the setting of your Bo Peep in Crime School--hilarious! One of my posts was also about Little Bo. We thought along similar lines this week.
ReplyDeleteIs it a requirement that you write two versions? Either that of you are so full of ideas and couldn't resist another one!
ReplyDeleteI like scrubs too
You saw some funny in the picture-I just love your second take. Hilarious with Bo!
ReplyDeleteThanks Pat, she really does shout out Bo doesn't she?!
ReplyDeleteGrandpa - if I get more than one idea as I mull it over, I like to share them both!
Thanks Susan
She sure does shout out Bo Peep.
ReplyDeleteBoth your takes were so clever!
Bravo
Good ones! :)
ReplyDeleteFunny! She does look a bit like Bo Peep!
ReplyDeleteGreat micros. Made me chuckle. Yes she's a bit of a Shirley Temple Bo Peep character. :O)
ReplyDelete"Scrubs!" That's hildarious.
ReplyDeleteVery clever. Poor Bo-Peep has a lot to learn.
ReplyDeleteLOL!!!! I love them both!! Excellent!!! Take care
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Extremely funny and clever! I love both of them. Great MF, as always.
ReplyDeleteI have difficulty writing one story for Microfiction so clever you! I love them both but the first one is my favourite. :)
ReplyDeleteThe second one is a hoot and a great play on words! :O)
ReplyDeleteThe second one, particularly, is a nice take on the prompt.
ReplyDeletescrubs! good one!
ReplyDeleteWonderful plays on words, Dom! I LOVE them both! If I have to prefer one -- it's the first. Succinct and pithy!
ReplyDeleteTwo ideas, smart gal, both were great!
ReplyDeletelove the first one, we both thought of TV shows :)
ReplyDeleteFunny and extremely clever takes on the pic. Enjoyed them both.
ReplyDeleteLoved both of them! Happy Monday!
ReplyDeleteFunny. I liked it a lot.
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ReplyDeleteI like them both--not sure which one I prefer...so it's a tie!
ReplyDeleteHave a great week. Cheers!
Both are good but the first one made me laugh out loud!
ReplyDeleteBoth are delightful and perfect for the prompt!
ReplyDeleteBoth are very funny. But since the crime school Bo Peep fits well with my trilogy, I think that was the best. I was ROFL :)
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Those two entries are really cool. I've never done this type of writing before but it looks like it takes talent.
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Love your sense of humor, Dominic.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week.
Very funny. Dominic, thanks for the much needed giggle.
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