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Wednesday 23 February 2011

Haiku Wednesday Elation

Sensational Haiku Wednesday

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Today's topic is Elation


Examinations
Nervous anticipation
Congratulations!


Dry mouth and wild heart
All hope balanced on one knee
The answer is yes


Missing in action:
Lover’s soul pierced through by grief
News is premature

16 comments:

  1. Great haiku. Is it Wednesday again? Are you sure? That was quick.

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  2. Great variety tere. Loved your haiku as always, not written mine yet. :O)

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  3. These are wonderful, Dom - I especially like the last one. They all evoke the emotion so well.

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  4. "All hope balanced on one knee" Great line!

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  5. All excellent!!!! I feel most elated reading these - thank you! Take care
    x

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  6. Fabulous haiku, Dom. Or is the plural 'haikus'? I don't think so, somehow.
    I can't seem to write a thing these days. I really enjoy your skill and (seemingly, from this side of the pond) effortless output. Your work gives me hope. Thanks.
    -- K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  7. WOW, a 4 word haiku - how awesome is that?? So much emotion in so few words. Really well done :)

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  8. I enjoy your writing even though I am at a loss as to how to comment on haikus.
    Nancy
    N. R. Williams, The Treasures of Carmelidrium

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  9. Such different sides of elation

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  10. All are great, of course, but I love the second. So romantic!

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  11. I really enjoyed reading these- I like the first one best. Thanks for posting

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  12. beautiful trio. fabulous haikus.

    trisha
    http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/02/20/free-soul-20th-feb-2011/

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  13. I'm a sucker for the second one :) Nice haiku!

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  14. Very thoughtful.

    Very well expressed.

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  15. Great examples where we experience this emotion in the 3 sets of Haiku!! Loved the first one the best and the picture says it all!! :)

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  16. Your elation haiku are all excellent. Thanks!

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