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Wednesday 16 February 2011

Haiku Wednesday Freestyle

Sensational Haiku Wednesday

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Today's topic is Freestyle

Freestyle? So does that mean the subject is freestyle, or that we are free to do our own thing?
I guess I get to choose! lol


Liquorice Allsorts
They take all my favourites
and leave the black ones


Dawn frost across fields
Lingers longer in the shade
Negative shadows


Frantic butterfly
Not a fish out of water
Speeding to a crawl

28 comments:

  1. Good luck on commenting on all the Crusaders blogs! 212? WOW! I didn't realize it had grown so large.

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  2. I love the first haiku. Happens to me every time I buy Allsorts, so I don't buy them any more.
    -- K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  3. What an amazing blogfest! It's gonna take awhile. Anyway, I really, really like the swimmer's haiku. It say soooo much.

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  4. I really like your first haiku but I think your second is your best yet! "Dawn frosts across field" - wonderful evocative imagery!!

    Take care
    x

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  5. I <3 licirice. Lome the idea of nrgative shadows & I find ur last haiku very deep.

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  6. Ooooo, each of these is wonderful! Negative shadows, speeding to a crawl, and taking the best pieces! Loved 'em!

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  7. "Negative shadows" - LOVE THAT!!

    I'm glad you're hooked, it's great to have you with us!

    And yes, freestyle means "anything you want", although a couple folks took it the other way... It's all good!

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  8. I seriously want to get involved w/ the crusade. Can you post a list (or where to find a list) of crusaders? I'm a new follower by the way.
    bethfred.com

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  9. I like all of these, you've captured many aspects of the theme. (I haven't had liquorice allsorts in yonks and now want some!)

    I'm glad you've posted about taking time to pop in on every crusader, I was in a bit of a tizzy about it and now don't feel I have to visit everyone in 24 hours!

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  10. fantastic ones. all three are attractive.

    trisha
    http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/02/14/free-soul-14th-feb-2011/

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  11. I've noticed a trend here Dominic - you seem to do everything in 3's!

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  12. Great Dom.

    Love the negative shadows.

    Michael

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  13. Haiku Wednesday? Do you have Limmerick Friday? That would be sweet.

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  14. Hi fellow crusader. Love the haikus. Especially the licorice allsorts one ;)

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  15. What a fun site! Welcome to the crusade

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  16. That liquorice allsorts one was my favourite. It's been years since I ate them!

    Jai

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  17. Hey there fellow crusader! I love the second haiku. And that candy just makes me hungry for sweets...

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  18. Hiya, buddy crusader! Thanks for following my blog; I'm making the rounds today too. Nice to meet you, and Happy Friday! :)

    Artzicarol Ramblings

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  19. Wonderful haikus. I'm not a big fan of licorice! The last haiku is my favorite.

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  20. I love some haiku
    And I love new crusaders
    Thanks for stopping by

    Yes - I know what you mean - I think the challenge of the crusade will be keeping up with everyone's blogs - but exciting!

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  21. Hello fellow Crusader. I like your haiku.

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  22. Fellow Crusader here!

    I love Allsorts! Especially the black ones! :D

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  23. Another crusader here! Just stopping by to say hi! :D

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  24. Love your haiku as always.
    I love black liquorice. :O)

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  25. I love your haiku, and your pictures! That first one makes my mouth water.

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  26. Great haikus!! The second one is my favorite. Love how you work with this form Dominic!

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