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Wednesday 26 January 2011

Transitions - Haiku Wednesday

Sensational Haiku Wednesday

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Today's topic is Transition



A delicate blush
Glowing anticipation
Night embraces day


Swollen gluttony
Retreat into sessile skin
Vibrantly reborn


The moon’s baleful glare
Subsumes all humanity
Frees the beast within
Posted by Dominic de Mattos at 08:00

14 comments:

  1. Anonymous26 January 2011 at 09:18

    Great takes on the theme all of them. Love the pics that you chose to go with them too. :O)

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  2. Old Kitty26 January 2011 at 11:20

    OH such evocative haikus!!! Wonderful! Well done you! Take care
    x

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  3. Margo Benson26 January 2011 at 11:56

    Beautiful, elegant and creative haiku.

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  4. Nanka26 January 2011 at 15:40

    A lot expressed in 17 syllables and 3 complete lines. Love this form of poetry and you have done it so elegantly!!

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  5. Kay L. Davies26 January 2011 at 17:24

    Very nicely done, Dom. I like all of them.
    -- K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  6. Lisa Ricard Claro26 January 2011 at 21:01

    I love the first, the imagery and the feelings it provokes. Well done.

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  7. N. R. Williams26 January 2011 at 21:24

    Very nice, Dom.
    Nancy
    N. R. Williams, fantasy author

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  8. Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog?26 January 2011 at 21:27

    "sessile skin" - elegantly done! :)

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  9. septembermom27 January 2011 at 00:04

    Dominic all of these are very good. I like that word "subsumes" I may have to borrow it for one of my poems soon.

    I did a vlog today, if you are interested to "see" me. I hope I didn't look too tired!

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  10. Melissa27 January 2011 at 05:18

    I really like the first one!

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  11. Anonymous27 January 2011 at 07:14

    terrific trio! your haikus are awesome.

    Trisha
    http://Mydomainpvt.wordpress.com
    Mine:
    http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/01/20/free-soul-20th-jan-2011/

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  12. Unknown28 January 2011 at 14:54

    Beautiful Haikus! I especially loved the third. Well done! Looking forward to following :))

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  13. Elizabeth Varadan, Author28 January 2011 at 18:50

    I especially liked the first one too. "Delicate blush" is such a lovely way to describe the sky.

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  14. Anonymous3 February 2011 at 07:58

    here i am again. these three are really beautiful.

    trisha
    mine is here now:
    http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/01/31/free-soul-31st-jan-2011/

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