No Kiss Blogfest Entry | Microfiction Monday Entry |
Now showing Blogfest - see below
The Now Showing blogfest, hosted by the wonderful Madeleine at Scribble and Edit asks us to write a short piece "showing" a "telling" phrase.
I have chosen HE CRIED
His eyes pricked and like a dam-burst, nothing in the world could stop the overflow of anguish from his broken heart.
That's it!
Now I'm going to get on with Chapter 2 of the Trial of the Forester!
So sad..............but very descriptive.
ReplyDeleteMy comment seems to have disappeared into cyberspace. I'm really pleased you've joined my blogfest. Enjoyed your entry :O)
ReplyDeleteHere's to blogfest, they are fun and wonderful. I will have to pass however because of my book tour. Alex J. Cavanugh has a music blog fest if your interested.
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N. R. Williams, fantasy author
I love your entry. :)
ReplyDeleteI've finally posted my Now Showing blogfest entry!
ReplyDeleteI loved your passage for he cried - nothing telling about it.
Very nice. Sad but nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing.
Over for the blogfest ~ you've got a wonderful "showing" entry!
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